The DC Chronicles - Machinima Series

[supahpingi]

Looking very well,altough the music ur using doesnt really fit the fallout universe,should have used some 50's rockabilly or sumthing

[Arnoldio]

Im watchin further than 2nd part now, yt decided to work...

As others said, lack of emotion in dialogue...

Also the effects on the speech itself could be there, like with that freaky dog-human, where it was echoing, according to the room he was in.

Voices are too dampened, they lack "space and enviroment", you know what i mean.

And one little thing, the "still" scenes and some dialogues can get a bit boring if they are too long, or the camera angles are repetitive. Try bringing up the detail angles while the conversation goes along...like if someone is smoking, make a shot close to his mouth while he inhales the smoke, after a while do a closeup of his hand flicking off the ash...

Its in the details, the side-story, that makes the viewer think about each character and make assupmtions of what way will the story go...give you an example

A: You will go to the town and bring me the gun.
B: Is it dangerous?
A: No, there's nobody there...

In this case if you were just showig the angles of face and body the dialogue has no real twist to it, its just direct yes or no. But if you would show the A subject tapping his knee with hand under the table, it could mean that he is lying but tries to convince B subject to go and think everything will be ok, if A subject was making a tight fist under the table that could mean that hes connected with someone and they want him dead etc...

[Drakortha]

Thanks for that ChizNizzle