The Sunrise...

Darth.Skyline · 07-27-2007, 05:45 AM

I wrote this letter yesterday while watching the sunrise. Its been 2 weeks since i last saw my fiancee Rute. But i get to meet her again on the 5th of august.

The letter :

Sitting here on the balcony, watching the sunrise. The beautiful orange skys infested with the magic of love. Somehow i see your face in the distance, i feel your heat and you heart beat against my body. It feels like your hugging me from behind, giving me gentle kisses. Whispering into my ear, so gently like the wind, the most important words that metter to us: I love you. Your soft and beautiful hands hold me tighter, but then the feeling evaporates, when i remember that your not really here. I look-up at the sun, still rising. Like my love for you always climbing higher and higher. I have an empty feeling inside. The feeling of loneliness, being without you. The feeling of security somehow vanished, i dont feel safe without you. I miss sleeping with you at nights, i find it hard to sleep. I always dream of you, and re-live the moments of our past. I dream of the hugs and kisses. I dream of the jokes and laughter. I dream of our future together. I dream of our children and our love still standing strong and tall. I just want you to know that no matter what may come my way, i will never leave you for anything. I love you always with all my heart.

Im just sitting here, just watching the sunrise.

Expendable Grunt · 07-27-2007, 04:27 PM

Very...mushy. Good job. Wondering if the lady's face in the image is the woman in question?

[R-DEV]bosco · 07-27-2007, 04:31 PM

She is.

[R-COM]Outlawz · 07-27-2007, 04:33 PM

[R-MOD]Wasteland · 07-27-2007, 04:45 PM

The sky is "infested" with love? Either you're starting and then dropping a love-as-a-disease, Love in the Time of Cholera-esque motif, or you need a thesaurus.

eddie · 07-27-2007, 04:56 PM

^

How about "The sky is glittered with love"?

Darth.Skyline · 07-27-2007, 04:58 PM

Heey come one now. It was written at 4 in the morning!!! gosh. Not everyone is william shakespeare you know. I dont see you doing anything better??? Plus its nice. Infested somehow has a nice meaning this way. Your just too blind to see.

And yes. the ladies face in the pic is the woman in question

edit: Glittered sounds gay lol...plus i dont like glitter...

eddie · 07-27-2007, 05:03 PM

So what? You're afraid of looking gay in front of your fiance? Nice...

~~.:iGi:.BLACKWIRE~~ · 07-27-2007, 05:06 PM

"One of the bravest things a man can do in life is admit that he loves a woman"

I read something along those lines somewhere...I'm sure?!

Darth.Skyline · 07-27-2007, 05:06 PM

She once told me i looked gay...dont want to happen again

this was when we were playing dress-up

07-27-2007, 05:45 AM	#1
Darth.Skyline Join Date: Feb 2006 United Kingdom Location: London, UK Posts: 3,236	The Sunrise... I wrote this letter yesterday while watching the sunrise. Its been 2 weeks since i last saw my fiancee Rute. But i get to meet her again on the 5th of august. The letter : Sitting here on the balcony, watching the sunrise. The beautiful orange skys infested with the magic of love. Somehow i see your face in the distance, i feel your heat and you heart beat against my body. It feels like your hugging me from behind, giving me gentle kisses. Whispering into my ear, so gently like the wind, the most important words that metter to us: I love you. Your soft and beautiful hands hold me tighter, but then the feeling evaporates, when i remember that your not really here. I look-up at the sun, still rising. Like my love for you always climbing higher and higher. I have an empty feeling inside. The feeling of loneliness, being without you. The feeling of security somehow vanished, i dont feel safe without you. I miss sleeping with you at nights, i find it hard to sleep. I always dream of you, and re-live the moments of our past. I dream of the hugs and kisses. I dream of the jokes and laughter. I dream of our future together. I dream of our children and our love still standing strong and tall. I just want you to know that no matter what may come my way, i will never leave you for anything. I love you always with all my heart. Im just sitting here, just watching the sunrise.
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07-27-2007, 04:27 PM	#2
Expendable Grunt Join Date: Mar 2007 Mongolia Location: Hollywood, MD Posts: 3,656	Very...mushy. Good job. Wondering if the lady's face in the image is the woman in question?
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07-27-2007, 04:33 PM	#4
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07-27-2007, 04:45 PM	#5
[R-MOD]Wasteland Forum Moderator Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Calgary Posts: 4,666	The sky is "infested" with love? Either you're starting and then dropping a love-as-a-disease, Love in the Time of Cholera-esque motif, or you need a thesaurus.
	Originally Posted by: ArmedDrunk&Angry we don't live in your fantastical world where you are the super hero sent to release us all from the bondage of ignorance Originally Posted by: [R-MOD]dunehunter don't mess with wasteland, a scary guy will drag you into an alleyway and rape you with a baseballbat

07-27-2007, 04:56 PM	#6
eddie The [R-MOD]s' Poodle Join Date: May 2005 Location: Worcester, England Posts: 4,312	^ How about "The sky is glittered with love"?
	I AM NOT ALLOWED A SIG UNLESS I SHOW I CAN BEHAVE MYSELF

07-27-2007, 04:31 PM	#3
[R-DEV]bosco PR Developer Join Date: Dec 2006 Germany Posts: 11,523	She is.

07-27-2007, 04:58 PM	#7
Darth.Skyline Join Date: Feb 2006 United Kingdom Location: London, UK Posts: 3,236	Heey come one now. It was written at 4 in the morning!!! gosh. Not everyone is william shakespeare you know. I dont see you doing anything better??? Plus its nice. Infested somehow has a nice meaning this way. Your just too blind to see. And yes. the ladies face in the pic is the woman in question edit: Glittered sounds gay lol...plus i dont like glitter...
	360 fan

07-27-2007, 05:03 PM	#8
eddie The [R-MOD]s' Poodle Join Date: May 2005 Location: Worcester, England Posts: 4,312	So what? You're afraid of looking gay in front of your fiance? Nice...
	I AM NOT ALLOWED A SIG UNLESS I SHOW I CAN BEHAVE MYSELF

07-27-2007, 05:06 PM	#9
~~.:iGi:.BLACKWIRE~~ Banned Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Glasgow, Scotland Posts: 428	"One of the bravest things a man can do in life is admit that he loves a woman" I read something along those lines somewhere...I'm sure?!

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